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I gots me a short story

 
 
Solitaire Rose as Tom Servo
09:46 / 09.02.02
I just got done with a short story over the weekend, and am kinda proud of it. It's a very different story for me, since most of my fiction is very serious (too much so in a lot of ways) and this one is an attempt at humor.

I sent it out to my "fiction list", people who have signed up to get my short stories and novel bits when I get them done from my website...

But for the first time, this story got NO responces. None. One of my friends said it was very good, but friends always say that.

Let me know if you think it sucks.
 
 
Trijhaos
09:46 / 09.02.02
I thought it was really good. The movie the main character writes sounds a great deal like "Snow Dogs" or whatever its called. I don't know if that was intentional or not, but I'm assuming so. Its good, there's nothing else I can say. I'm sure someone here will be able to give better criticism.